Hey hey hey! It's September's edition of Tantalus Tuesday! Wahoo!
Oh, what to choose, what to choose? How best to tease you and make you wish you were beta reading for me when I complete a second draft?
Hmmm....
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That's it for September! Stay tuned sometime in October for another rousing edition of Tantalus Tuesday!
ah, a romance. lovely.
ReplyDeleteThat was fun! Thanx.
ReplyDeleteOooh, nice. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI definitely liked this.
ReplyDeleteJust, as a general comment--don't kill me!--I think you overuse the adjectives:
"deep, lilting, musical"
"long, lustrous auburn hair"
Find one word that summarizes or is best because I think readers will get caught up in the words.
Have a great week!
Glad you enjoyed it! I should have a doozy of a teaser for October's edition.
ReplyDeleteAnd just a reminder that these scenes are completely out of their original context so any notions you might have about what's going on could be proved completely wrong should this book ever see the light of publishing day.